Changes to our Teaser Trailer-The Montage

After finishing the first draft of our Teaser Trailer, the feedback we received said that our beginning montage was too long, providing an unclear narrative as it seemed more like a film opening rather than a Teaser Trailer. It would have therefore confused the audience, as they may not have been able to clearly identify the genre of out piece.

We therefore decided to cut down the montage at the beginning of our trailer. We only used three scenes, all with the protagonist with her back to the camera. The feedback from our changed montage scene was more positive due to the shorter length, and the fact that it provided a clearer narrative for the audience, as the transition to the party scene in our trailer works better.




To make this transition work, along with cutting down the beginning montage, we also added the non-diegetic sound of an alarm clock, which increases in volume and tempo to mirror a heart monitor, which provides a clear transition to the next scene, which is the POV of the protagonist the party.